literature

Waiting

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Coming home, unaware, with no way of knowing.
No way to expect that they're waiting.

It was a Wednesday, A warm, sunny Wednesday
So beautiful, so disgusting, So wrong.

They're waiting, so unusual, unreal, unexpected,
Like statues, expressionless, "Sit down, we have to talk".

Oh no, what now? Did I do something wrong?
Am I in trouble? I sit there, waiting

A bomb exploded! Tearing through me.
I didn't want to believe it. I couldn't believe it.

They're lying, they have to be lying. But why would they?
How could they? I knew it was true but I didn't believe it.

Memories flooded my thoughts. My mind a creek, a river, an ocean,
Knowing that they're out there, somewhere,
They're waiting...
I wrote this for homework with the poem to be about a memory. I might enter this poem into a poetry competition so any critiques are appreciated.
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Livoness's avatar
This poem actually made me cry, because it remembers me of something that happened to me. 
 Thank you for sharing this! :hug:2 rvmp